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关键词：临安托福大班备考 托福大班
一篇优秀的文章主要是重点突出，逻辑紧凑，所以托福写作想要取得高分的话还是要在平时多看下范文，然后多多练习，今天 新航道托福 培训小编为大家分享下托福写作如何突出重点，希望能帮助各位考生在考试时写出好的文章。
1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾。 一般而论，最显眼的位置是在“句尾，其次是在句首，中间的位置最平淡，乏善可陈。例如：
(1)Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers" attention.
(2) The history of vocabulary is， in many ways， the record of civilization.
把重点放在句尾是种”吊胃口“的方法，读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。
2. 在复杂句里，把主句放在从句之后。除了名词从句和形容词从句之外，因为它们位置较固定，副词从句中有几种的位置灵活，可以在主句之前出现，也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前，重点则放在后头的主句，如(3b)： (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.
(3b) When I went to town yesterday， I came upon an old classmate. 副词短语更是如此，如 (4b)： (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives， razors and other useful tools because of its durability.
(4b) Because of its durability， steel is commonly used to make knives， razors and other useful tools.
3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头，如(5b)和(6b)： (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera
(5b) I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.
(6a) That singer"s life was tragic and brief.
(6b) That singer"s life was brief and tragic.
4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如： (7) Tony ate his dinner， watched TV， and then went to bed.
(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school， high school and institute of higher education?
5. 必要时，重复重要的语词或概念。 例如： (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty， he likes their delicacy， he likes their vivacity， and he likes their silence.
(10) …the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.
相信很多同学对于托福写作都十分头疼，其实找对方法对于写作来说很重要。今天 杭州新航道 小编为大家介绍一下托福写作的练习要点，希望能对大家有所帮助。
关于写作，很多同学都问过这个问题：如果我坚持用英语写日记，对提高英语写作有帮助吗?
帮助是有的，不过不像一些人想象的那么大。因为如果我们每次写作都在同一语言水平写，而不注意随时的积累，提高速度就会比较缓慢。不过，还有种人走另一个极端，就是觉得自己写的不好，所以就从不动手写文章。总是自己闷着头写和总是仰着头不写，这两种方式都不可取。最好的办法就是边学边写。
这里推荐大家采用一种行之有效的练习方法，就是模仿写作。模仿写作类似于、但不同于汉译英。模仿写作要求文章本身是原汁原味的英语文章，同时有比较地道的汉语翻译。
在训练的时候，先不要看英语原文，而是看着翻译过来的汉语，先把它翻回英文。之后再和英语原文对照。有比较就有鉴别。通过这种比较，我们就能够感觉出，同样一个意思，人家用那个词，那样的句型表达，为什么比自己写的好。这比单纯的背诵人家写好的英语范文，或者自己埋头苦写，不去积累，效果要好很多。这个方法很简单，但对于提高写作水平非常有效。
写作中重要的构成因素，除了语言以外，谋篇布局的逻辑其实是很重要的。也就是我们经常说的“思维”。如果我们按照中国人的语言和文化习惯去写，写出来的文章西方人有时候是看不明白的。虽然写作没有固定格式，以有效表意为核心要素。但不管一开始练习写作时我们的文章布局有多刻板，以后的行文有多自如，有一个原则是我们从始至终都应该把握的，就是自己说的观点，自己要提出论据来证明。
我们给这种原则起了个名字，叫横竖原则。“横”是大家的观点，“竖”是证明观点的论据。论据要细节化，不要用一个观点去证明另一个观点，用一个抽象去解释另一个抽象。
这里建议大家，一开始写文章，不要抓个题目过来就开始写。一开始写的题目，最好是有范文的。这样，你写完去和范文比较，主要比较逻辑关系、论证手法、论据选择。
写作有没有必要背范文呢?你要有时间有精力背，我也不拦着你。熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也能吟。你要愿意多背些范文，对写作肯定有帮助。可是，如果从投入产出上比较背诵范文和模仿写作，后者帮助提高的效果应该是更快些。因为后者比前者更有针对性。你能通过写完之后的比较，更好的发现自己写作中或思维上的问题。
写作有没有必要背模板呢?基础弱的、没法成句的是必须要记一些的，这样保证在考试紧张时，起码能完成写作任务。这里大家要知道，在大多数考试评分系统中，如果一篇文章是残篇，也就是说如果没写完，就算前面写的内容再好，文采再好，扣分也是非常重的。
还有同学问：那是不是用模板写的文章，就一定得不了高分呢?也不是。我看到过不少考试中的满分作文也都是模板样式的。所以大家不用刻意的去使用或回避模板。你如果积累到一定水平之后，自然就会练就更多的谋篇布局的方式方法。
关于练习写作的素材，如果是要参加某个考试，就可以选择相关的范文从模仿写作练起。如果是单纯为了提高写作能力，可以用新概念来练习模仿写作。不过比用范文练习，会更费时间。再次强调，一定得找外国人写的原汁原味的作文范文或英语文章练习模仿写作，把主要精力放在谋篇布局和句型结构的选择上。
如果大家处于时间紧任务重的学习状态和考试压力下，建议大量阅读范文和模仿写作同步进行。在一篇范文中看到的好句子，争取自己在下一篇的写作中就把它用出去。
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新航道国际教育集团(NEW CHANNEL INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION GROUP LIMITED) 由中国著名英语教育专家与教学管理专家胡敏教授率领一批国内外教育精英及专家学者共同创办于2004年，国际数据集团(IDG)（美国）和Kaplan国际教育集团（美国）参与战略投资。“新航道”三个字源于胡敏教授创办机构时对其二十一年教育实践的总结，下决心在大学的“庙堂英语”和培训机构的“江湖英语”之间开辟语言教育的新航道。新航道国际教育集团恪守“奋斗成就梦想”的核心价值观，坚持“高能高分”的教育理念，立志“做全球顶尖的教育机构”，帮助中国学子和家庭实现更美好的人生。
New Channel International Education Group was founded in 2004 by a group of elite Chinese and foreign language trainers and expert academics, led by English Language Education and Academic Management expert Prof. Hu Min. New Channel is an international language education institution that has received strategic investment from the International Data Group and Kaplan. The brand "New Channel" originated from the accumulation of Prof. Hu Min's twenty-one years of teaching experience. Prof. Hu Min was determined to pioneer a "New Channel" of language education between Chinese colleges at English Language Education and Social English training. New Channel has been keeping to its core value "Hard work makes dreams come true." persisting in the education philosophy of "Better English, Higher Score", and striving to be a global top educational institution, thereby helping Chinese students and their families to make life better.
新航道国际教育集团下辖培训学校、留学咨询公司、美国AP课程中心、在线教育事业部、优加青少英语事业部、派乐多幼少儿英语事业部、图书出版事业部、加盟事业部、各省市分支机构等五十五家机构，合作单位包括北京大学、中国人民大学、外交学院、首都师范大学、上海师范大学、南京师范大学、教育部高等教育出版社、麦克米伦教育（英国）等知名学府和学术机构。
New Channel has a wide variety of subsidiaries including training schools, study abroad consulting companies, an AP Curriculum Center, an E-learning department (New Channel online), A+ English, Parade English, a book-publishing department, a franchising department, and branch organizations all over China. New Channel has partnerships with organizations including Peking University, Renmin University of China, China Foreign Affairs University, Capital Normal University, Shanghai Normal University, Nanjing Normal University, China Higher Education Press, MacMillan Education, and other renowned academic organizations and schools.
在12年的时间里，新航道培训学校遍布全国40多个城市，开设了超过300个学习中心。新航道培训学校以“我坚持，我成功”为精神内涵，坚持“学术、励志、激情”的教学风格言行一致，切实践行“精品小班+全程助教+个性化服务”三大标准，凭借着深厚的学术功底、务实的教学作风、强劲的研发能力和旺盛的进取精神成为行业的领导品牌，在教学内容、教材研发、授课质量、环境服务等多个方面为业界创立了全新的标准，并不断引领中国英语培训业的全面升级。
In the past 12 years, New Channel has established branches in over 40 cities across China, and opened more than 300 learning centers. Following the spirit of the school's motto, "I will persist until I succeed! ", our training schools persist in the teaching style of being "Academic, Motivational and Passionate", and follow the standards of having "Small Classes, Teaching Assistants and Individualized Service". Relying on a deep foundation in academics, a pragmatic educational style, a strong capacity for research and development, and a prolific enterprising spirit, New Channel has quickly risen to the top of its industry. With its educational content, textbook R&D, the quality of its courses, and its service environment, New Channel has set a new standard, raising the bar for China's English training industry, and creating a path to success in English for all Chinese students.
出国考试：提供IELTS（雅思）、TOEFL（托福）、GRE、GMAT、SAT、ACT、AP、SSAT、留学英语能力预备课程和外教口语等优质出国考试培训课程。个性化、精品小班、全封闭学习模式，满足不同学员的不同学习需求。通过制订和实施精准的学习方案，使学员的英语能力和考试成绩在短期内得到迅速提高，并熟练掌握海外学习所需的批判性思维、社会交往和团队协作能力。
English Training: New Channel provides IELTS, TOEFL, GRE, GMAT, SAT, ACT, AP, SSAT, an overseas study English preparation program, English Express, and other high quality training programs. Our individualized training programs, elite small class-size programs, and boarding school program can meet various learning needs of students. By implementing personalized learning plans, our programs can enable students to reach a higher level of English, achieve higher scores in the short term, and can enable them to master skills that are required during overseas study as critical thinking, effective communication and team work.
青少英语：优加青少英语是新航道国际教育集团旗下高端青少英语教育品牌，专注于6-16岁学生英语能力的培养，采用剑桥系列教材，紧密结合KET、PET、FCE与中高考测评体系，将英语学习、训练、考核三个环节有机结合，为学生提供全方位的英语学习解决方案，培养真正能使用英语的中国青少年。
A+ English: "A+ English" is New Channel's elite English training program for K-12 students. Focused on cultivating the English abilities of children ages 6-16, New Channel utilizes Cambridge study material, tying together KET, PET, FCE, and middle/high school entrance exam systems with English learning, training, and testing, providing students a versatile learning plan and fostering children who can truly use English.
少儿英语：派乐多快乐英语是新航道国际教育集团旗下的高端幼少儿英语培训品牌。作为“Edutainment”即“育乐”教育理念的领导者，派乐多快乐英语凭借独有的“实景反应式”教学模式，将“Education”（教育）和“Entertainment”（娱乐）两个元素完美结合，以寓教于乐的形式把“快乐学习”融入到孩子们的课堂， “派送给孩子快乐多多”!
Kid's English: The "Parade English" is New Channel's elite English training program for young children. As a leader of "Edutainment", Parade English intertwines education and entertainment using unique "real-life" teaching methods, infusing fun into children's learning experience, thereby enabling youngsters to enjoy learning.
留学服务：将“以诚信编织您的未来”作为服务理念，以美国名校导师领衔，基于海量成功案例大数据制定专业的留学规划解决方案，提供全程多对一贴心、高端服务。
Study Abroad: New Channel's Study Abroad Center is led by renowned instructors from American colleges providing services based on the principle of “Using Integrity to Create Your Future”. With the foundation of numerous successful cases, our center can deliver professional tailored overseas study portfolios, as well as attentive and high quality service along the way.
美国AP课程中心：长郡中学美国AP课程中心是美国大学理事会（College Board）授权的湖南首个AP全日制学习中心，致力于引进国外优质的教育资源，促进中国高中教育教学改革，培养胸怀祖国且具有国际视野和全球竞争力的国际复合型、创新型、领袖型人才。
AP Curriculum: New Channel's AP Curriculum Center at Changjun Middle School in Changsha is the first full-time learning center in Hunan Province authorized by the College Board. The center is engaged in introducing high quality education resources from overseas, promoting education reforms in high schools in China, and cultivating patriotic, globalized, and highly-competitive individuals.
在线教育：依托新航道强大师资团队和教学实力，提供优质的雅思、托福和新SAT等各门课程的录播、直播与个性化定制课程，学员可以随时随地跟随名师进行学习，通过网络远程交互，将最优秀的课程内容、最高效的教学成果传播到四面八方。
E-learning: Based on New Channel's strong teaching team and educational resources, New Channel's E-learning provides high quality IELTS, TOEFL and re-designed SAT online courses, which are recorded, streamed and personalized. Students can learn from teachers anywhere and anytime, and also can interact with other students online. Through E-learning we hope our excellent courses and teaching philosophy can reach all corners of the world.
图书出版：集图书、音像制品的编辑、制作、发行及零售于一体，携手中国高等教育出版社、中国出版集团、中国对外翻译出版公司以及世界知识出版社，与全球著名的教育培训机构美国开普兰（KAPLAN）国际教育集团、麦克米伦、麦格劳-希尔公司以及圣智学习出版集团等国际著名教育、出版企业建立了良好的合作关系。到目前为止，自主研发图书及音像产品逾400种，内容涉及国内外考试及综合英语，百万英语学习者开卷有益。
Publishing: New Channel's book-publishing department is engaged in book and audio editing, publishing, marketing, and retailing. Currently it is partnering with China Higher Education Press, China Publishing Group Corp., CTPC and World Affairs Press, and it is also cooperating with renowned institutions such as Kaplan, MacMillan Education, McGraw-Hill, and CENGAGE Learning. To date, New Channel has produced over 400 original books and multimedia products, with content ranging from domestic and international tests to comprehensive English with distributors in every province, city, and autonomous regions in China. Millions of students have benefited from these materials.
加盟事业：以“新航道”品牌为成功模式，推广至全国七十多个城市，与有志于英语教育事业的同仁们共同努力，以“高能高分”出击，带动全国市场快速发展。
Franchising: Based on the successful "New Channel" model, New Channel's franchising department has promoted our brand to more than seventy cities across China. We are dedicated to collaborating with those committed to English education and to help develop the national market under the philosophy of "Better English, Higher Score".
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