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义乌新航道零基础培训雅思学校义乌雅思雅思小作文一直是大家比较头痛的一个问题，因为在写小作文的过程当中，大家会发现拿到一个比较基础的分数还是比较简单的，但是如果想要拿到一个比较高的分数的话，大家再评分标准，还有自己的作文，上面其实不太知道自己有哪些缺点，今天我们就来看一下一篇写的比较好的小作文应该达到什么样的标准。
胡老师
毕业于爱丁堡大学，剑桥大学，悉尼大学访问学者。教授雅思托福考试，授课时长达到8000小时，学生提分率达到95%。
雅思小作文的高分技巧
高分小作文范例：
The graph presents the number of four distinct types of meat consumed by European country between 1979 and 2004.
Overview, before 1989, people consumed beef the most and fish the least,while in the next 5 years, people turned to consume chicken the most.
In 1979, about 220 grams of beef were consumed per person per week, which was the largest number among these four meat. Then, the figure experienced a dramatic fluctuation for the next 5 years before a stable change from 1984 to 1989. After that the figure continually decreased and reached its bottom at roughly 100 grams in 2004. Similarly, the number of consuming lamb maintained a decrease tread through all the time,which reached the lowest point of 50 grams in 2004.
For Chicken, the figure of it ranked the third at the beginning, which was approximately 145 grams. While the consumption of chicken grew significantly during the 25 years and reached its peak at approximately 250 grams., which exceeded lamb in 1980(149 grams) and beef in 1989(190 grams) respectively. For fish consumption, the figure fluctuated slightly around 50 grams in the 25 years.
译文：
图表显示了1979年至2004年间欧洲国家消费的四种不同类型肉类的数量。
综上所述，1989年以前，人们消费牛肉最多，鱼最少，而在接下来的5年里，人们转向消费鸡肉最多。
1979年，每人每周消费约220克牛肉，是这四种肉类中消费量的一种。然后，这一数字在随后的5年中经历了剧烈的波动，然后从1984年到1989年出现了稳定的变化。此后，这一数字不断下降，2004年达到100克左右的底部。羊肉消费量一直呈下降趋势，2004年达到50克的点。
对于鸡肉来说，它的数量在一开始排在第三位，大约145克。而鸡肉的消费量在这25年中显著增长，达到峰值约250克，分别超过1980年的羊肉（149克）和1989年的牛肉（190克）。在过去的25年里，鱼类消费量在50克左右略有波动。
老师分析：
我们可以看到，在这个小作文当中，这篇范文使用的词汇语法和句子结构都是比较清楚，直接的。同学们在写小作文的过程当中，也应该注意自己所使用词语的准确性，并且在句子结构上应该达到尽量的多变。只有通过词汇句子语法句型上面的多变和准确，才能够比较好的到达一个高峰的效果，那么大家在写作文的过程当中，经常会拿不准自己应该使用什么样的词句型，有哪些变化和变化？比较好的句型有哪些？义乌雅思辅导，义乌雅思6分班，义乌雅思6.5分培训，义乌雅思7分班，义乌新航道雅思培训经典格言：扶危周急固为美事。能不自夸，则其德厚矣！。
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IELTS，由英国文化协会、剑桥大学考试委员会和澳大利亚教育国际开发署共同举办的国际英语水平测试。为申请赴英语国家（美国、英国、澳大利亚、加拿大、新西兰等）留学（A类）、移民（G类）的非英语国家学生而设，用来评定考生运用英语的能力。
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考试报名费用
2020年1月开始雅思官方考试，义乌新航道零基础培训雅思学校义乌雅思 单次报名费用改为2170元 |
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考试时间 每月举办1-4场考试，成绩在考试结束后5-7个工作日后查询 |
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考试目的
IELTS 是为申请赴英语国家留学 移民的学生评定英语能力 |
义乌新航道零基础培训雅思学校义乌雅思
义乌雅思培训，义乌雅思培训班，义乌学雅思哪家强，义乌新航道雅思培训励志语录：有信心的人，可以化渺小为伟大，化平庸为神奇。——萧伯纳。2025年6月5雅思大作文题目
雅思大作文示范写作 | 家庭影响 or 外界影响更大？
A family has a great influence on children’s development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. Do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
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（交代背景）The growth of a child is affected by numerous factors. （复述题目）Some feel a family is of great importance to children, while others argue that influences from outside the home play a larger role in shaping them. （作者立场）In my view, it is a child’s family that has a more significant impact on how the child develops.
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（作者理由）Children learn most of their habits and behaviors from those with whom they spend the most time during early childhood, i.e. their family members. Parents are the ones raising their children, after all, and it is during children’s formative years that their brains encode vital socialization skills and other interactive attitudes. （举例）This is exemplified by the high rate of criminality among children who grew up in broken homes. When parents are neglectful or abusive, children learn these habits and have high tendencies to repeat such behaviors themselves. （对比）On the opposite end of the spectrum, parents who teach constructive habits such as responsibility and independence to their children most often produce competent and upstanding citizens who know better than(不至于) to follow the crowd. Such children do not require the approval of others for validation（确认；证实）, and thus are not affected by outside influences as much.
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（让步）Admittedly, there are situations in which influences outside the home have a greater effect on a child’s development than families do. As mentioned above, when parents are neglectful their children will instinctively seek out role models whom they can emulate（努力赶上）. This frequently leads to them “falling in with a bad crowd” or being peer pressured into activities or lifestyles which are not healthy. For instance, drug abusers often started because their parents were not around to supervise them or educate them, and thus as children they spent time with similar children to whom they could relate. As the adage goes, “when the blind lead the blind, everyone falls in the ditch.” （转折）Yet, even in this case, it is ultimately the influence of the family, or lack thereof that has the greatest effect on how a child develops: whether for good or ill, it all stems from one’s home life.
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（复述立场）All in all, I believe that children develop along the path that a family leads them to. （总结论点）Good homes and parents will plan a clear path easy to follow, whereas a neglectful or abusive family may cause children to be led astray by outside influences. With good parenting, no amount of peer pressure or other non-home factors can have much of an effect on a child.
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