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德清全封闭雅思培训中心,湖州学雅思已经入坑的考鸭应该对于雅思写作几类常考的话题都有所了解，比如：教育类、科技类、传统与文化类、城市化与全球化、政府类、环境类等。
那么有的同学可能会想：“既然我知道了雅思写作的出题范围，那是不是有高分模板可以背?
有什么雅思写作开头模板适合记住？
即使无法背全文，也能背个开头节省点时间吧?”
新航道小编今天就告诉大家!有的，睡着了就什么都有。
你们好好想想!!!雅思写作是有出题范围!但这些概念都很宏大!!!基本包含了世界的方方面面!!!所以同学们还是不要“痴心妄想”了。其实另一种方法——“paraphrase”(改写)，也能帮助大家快速写出作文开头，起到节省时间的效果，不如一起来看看吧!
改写的作用
首先，很多雅思老师和辅导资料都是推荐考生使用改写的，包括小编在前几天的推文中也有强调在开头段要使用改写。因为这表明了相当重要的一点：你们已经理解了问题，并有能力把它变成自己的话。直接给大家举个例子：
Q：The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.To what extent do you agree?
如果有同学写成下面这样：
Some people think that it is better to use government funding to prevent health problems than to spend money on treatments.
那么没有任何问题，它积极地向考官表示了考生迅速理解和消化的能力，并且有功底用自己的话重新叙述，且没有跑题!相当于开头第 一句话就给了考官一次冲击，让ta记住了你，百利而无一害!
而且改写可不只有这一种，运用得当的话完全可以把开头写出花来，接下来就教给大家快速写出开头的改写方法~
改写的具体操作
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简单的同义替换改写
第 一个也是最简单的方法就是使用同义替换词，因为不管我们使用的是简单词还是复杂词，总是可以找到意思接近的表达来增加丰富度。比如：
The reason for increasing levels of pollution are the development of industry andair travel.
可以改为：The cause of rising levels of pollution are the growth and expansion of industry as well as the number of people travelling by air.
这种改法基本没有改变句子结构，都是用的同义替换，比如：“causes=reasons”、“increasing=rising”、“and=as well as”、“air travel=travelling by air”等。
但是这种方法很容易导致两个问题：
Ⅰ. 语法错误
在替换表达的过程中，常见的结果就是出现语法错误，比如：
Treating and medicine investment from government is essential than prevent the health problem.
这样改写就会直接显示出考生水平有限，反而会容易掉到5分档。
Ⅱ. 用语不自然
还有一种就是虽然语法没出错，但就显得非常奇怪，比如：
Some people think that impeding ailments is more important than correcting them.(有人认为预防疾病的发生比治疗它更重要。)
这显而易见就是尝试使用“非常见词汇”失败的例子，使用一些非常偏/难/怪的词。要谨记一点的是：并不是每一个单词都有一个完美的同义词，不同的同义词之间会有微妙的区别，一定要区分之后再使用，比如下面这些都是“treatment”的同义词：
如果把“treatment”换成“hospitalization(住院)”，那么其实是在缩小范围，而如果换成“prescription”或者“operation”，都是和它相关但有偏差的词。
所以在练习的时候一定要再三确定自己使用的同义替换表达是否足够自然，刚开始可能有些痛苦，但熟悉之后同学们就可以拥有小型的同义替换词库，写作文时就能做到信手拈来。比如想到“important”，就能用“crucial/critical/significant/vital”来代替~
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改变单词词性
这种方法是仍然使用题目中给出的词汇，但改变其词性，比如：
Many people are unhealthy because they fail to eat well and exercise.
可以改为：Many people have poor health because they are failing to eat well and are not exercising enough.
这代表了考生对单词的掌握度很高，并能用多种方式运用这些单词，在词汇方面也是非常加分的哦~还有一些常见的单词变式可以使用：
■ developing=the development
■ increasing=the increase of
■ pollution=being polluted
■ explain=explanation
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使用反义词
没错，反义词也可以很好地帮助大家改写，打个比方：
The water pollution has forced several small businesses to shut down, whereas big brands are still standing in the established position.
可以改为：A few small businesses have survived the imposed crisis of the water pollution.
这种情况下就相当于是反其道而行之，所以如果同学们害怕使用同义词时出现偏差，不妨试试这种方法，展现自己的词汇量。
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改变句子结构
这种方法对语法的要求就会稍高一些
Many people are unhealthy because they fail to eat well and exercise.
可以改为：Many people fail to eat well and exercise and, for that reason, they are unhealthy.
或者：Failing to eat well and not exercising are the reasons that many people have poor health.
这些句式都可以很好地帮助大家不跑题的同时完成对题目的改写，关于句子结构的改变小编在之前的文章里也有推荐大家一个网站，能够给到你们更多的转换思路，具体可以点击推文查看：想通过自检雅思作文拿到7?这些资源你最好都用上!
这些就是新航道小编想告诉大家关于改写的一切啦~与其花这么多时间背冗长的模板生搬硬套，不如就像上面说的一样，通过简单的单词替换也好、转换句子结构但不改变题目中的单词也好，写出有效的开头，这样考官看得也很开心，分数也高哦!
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2025年12月25日雅思大作文题目
Some people believe that university students should pay all the costs of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
Are university graduates the only beneficiaries of tertiary education? The answer is absolutely “No”. Personally, government and college students should be jointly responsible for the costs involved in providing university courses for the reason that both of them can be benefitted.
12月25日雅思大作文真题参考范文
解析
2015年教育类老话题，重点抓住题干中的极端词“all”, “only”，立场：不同意。相关话题：(1) In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, government pays for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages? (2) Today, university students’ tuition is paid in one of the following ways: 1.all paid by government; 2.all paid by students themselves; 3. all paid by students using a loan and repaid after graduation. Compare the advantages of these three ways and choose the one you think is the best.
? beneficiary n. 受益人,受惠者
? tertiary adj. <英> (继初等、中等教育之后的)高等教育的,大学教育的
? jointly adv. 联合地,共同地
Body 1
Admittedly, higher education can bring certain gains to individual students. More accurately, it is through pursuing college-level education that students acquire professional knowledge and skills which will facilitate them to secure a decent job with a generous salary so as to earn their daily sustenance after graduation. Meanwhile, having participated in diverse seminars and lectures, students can also sharpen their wits, think out of the box, and spice up their lives. In this case, it is justifiable to charge ordinary students a reasonable tuition fee. As to the students from impoverished families, they can finish college via loans provided by the government.
解析
题干中隐藏“因果关系”，是论述立场时的关键。[让步] 个人受益：保证获得工作，养活自己 → 个人应该承担学费；考虑低保家庭，政府可提供贷款辅助完成学业
? secure vt. 获得
? generous adj. 慷慨的；丰富的
? spice up v. 增添趣味
? impoverished adj. 非常贫困的
Body 2
However, I am totally against that individual graduates are the only beneficiaries, which indicates that behind higher education are more upsides for the society as a whole. To illustrate, those students who have a facility for academics are more likely to be nurtured into talents through tertiary education, which will inject vitality into scientific domains conducive to social soundness, such as healthcare, engineering, national defence, etc. Additionally, ordinary graduates, having cultivated the professional skills, will engage themselves in all walks of life, which will in the long term guarantee the whole society a more vigorous and productive workforce. In this sense, the government ought to allocate some budgets in the form of scholarships and subsidies that can offset part of students’ tuition fees.
解析
[立论] 对社会有好处：1. 有天赋的学生可以被培养成人才，为科研领域注入新鲜血液；2. 普通学生：更有活力的劳动市场 → 政府应该“以奖学金或补贴的方式”投入费用
? facility n. 天赋
? nurture vt. 培育，培养
? vitality n. 生命力，生机
? conducive to adj. 对…有用
? offset vt. 抵消，补偿
Conclusion
In light of the above, students and authorities should jointly pay for the tuition fees, since both of them are benefitted from university education.
解析
重申观点
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