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11月11日雅思大作文： 专业人士是否应该有更高的薪资？
2025年11月11雅思大作文题目
Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses, and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the fields of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高 分范文及解析
Introduction
With the outbreak of pandemics, more contributions of professionals such as doctors, nurses, and teachers have been witnessed by the public. Naturally, some propose that workers in aforementioned domains deserve higher salaries than those engaged in sports and entertainment do. Personally, I disagree with this proposal.
解析
老题新出，之前有过题目单讨论运动员是否应该获得高薪资。本题需要注意前后两个群体的对比，从两者的异同点进行比较。整体思路：不同意。都是社会分工下正常的职业，应该按个人在所在领域的贡献和能力配比工资，而不是领域间进行整体工资比较。
? professional n. 专业人士，专家（如医生、律师等）
? aforementioned adj. 前面提到的
? deserve vt. 值得
Body 1
Irrefutably, workers with expertise do guarantee the basic survival of the public and conduce to the social soundness. Knowledgeable teachers, having made every effort to refine their knowledge and obtain relevant qualification, impart both theories and moral values to younger generations, which thus nurtures students into talents and injects vitality into all walks of life to ensure fundamental social development. Hospital staff, be they doctors or nurses, negotiate every impediment to save people’s lives by researching non-stop remedies and therapies or even sometimes risking their own lives. So many touching stories about them have been reported via media and even edited into documentaries during the impacts of COVID-19. Affirming their efforts and contributions, government has already issued certain policies to subsidize workers in those domains.
解析
承认专业人士对社会的贡献（保障基本民生）以及这些群体可能面临的风险。
? refine vt. 提炼
? impart sth. to sb. 给予某人某物（常跟抽象名词）
? nurture vt. 培养
? inject vitality into 注入活力
? negotiate every impediment 披荆斩棘
Body 2
However, I would also like to highlight that celebrities in sports and entertainment in fact play an equally essential role in another way. To illustrate, some may argue that it is unfair for sportsmen to be better paid, since they do not provide vital services. Football players, for example, earn enormous salaries by simply kicking a ball. However, such arguments can hold no water, as sports stars not only have dedicated hours of practice to developing their fitness and skills and often struggle with irreversible diseases in their later life but also have raised the fame of their nations by standing out in international games like Olympics. Regarding stars in entertainment, it is their works – movies, shows, or songs – that spice up people’s life especially during the period of lockdown, thus satisfying viewers’ spiritual demands.
解析
指出运动员和娱乐明星对社会的贡献（满足精神需求）以及面临的风险。
? hold no water 站不住脚
? irreversible adj. 不可逆的；不可治愈的
? spice up v. 增添趣味
? lockdown n. 封城
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In conclusion, contributions of neither professional workers nor staff in sports and entertainment should be ignored. Since different jobs are merely the results of social division of labour, individuals’ salaries, regardless of which domain they work in, should only hinge on their performance in their own fields
解析
【解析】重申观点
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8月7日雅思大作文示范写作 | 孩子犯错的自由，范文及解析
Introduction
For children’s upbringing, some reckon that adults, especially parents, should avoid them from making mistakes, while I tend to harbour the view that teenagers should not be totally shackled.
【解析】教育类大话题：孩子是否有自由犯错？在一定限制条件之下，允许孩子试错，只要不走极端即可，如青少年犯罪。法律道德是基本底线。
8月7日雅思大作文| 孩子犯错的自由
? shackle vt. 束缚，阻挠，羁绊〔含贬义〕（用带有情感色彩的词，加强自己的立场）
Body 1
Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate that guardians’ intervention is indispensable to some extent, since they are constitutionally responsible for their children’s growth. Smart parents understand that it cannot count solely on their kids, who, though indeed have the freedom, are too young to distinguish right from wrong, and that external conditions, adults’ advice and supervision, are needed. Therefore, mature adults, particularly parents, steps in and utilises their power. For instance, guardians may put a cap on what kind of video games teenagers play or what sorts of people adolescents make friends with in case those immature children get addicted to games containing too much violence or, even worse, sunk into gangs, which consequently render them off the right life track.
【解析】让步：从法律层面说，家长有责任防止孩子走上歧路，避免其受到不可逆的伤害，毕竟大多数孩子不够成熟，不能明辨是非。
? guardian n. [律]监护人
? intervention n. 干预（褒）
? constitutionally adv. 合乎宪法地
? count solely on 仅仅只依赖于
? distinguish right from wrong 明辨是非
? step in v. 介入
? put a cap on v. 限制
? off the right life track 偏离人生正轨
Body 2
However, apart from the aforementioned cases, too much interference on children’s making mistakes may incur repercussions running counter to adults’ expectation. More accurately, since most young children are to some degree rebellious, they are less likely to follow every piece of advice from adults, especially when the strict supervision develops into excessive control. Not surprisingly, this may fuel children’s grumble and push them to make mistakes instead. In fact, children should be allowed to learn from experiences. As long as young individuals are well-instructed, they are highly likely to learn from their mistakes about how to tell right from wrong, to take all factors into consideration before making decisions, and to reflect upon and correct themselves.
【解析】除去以上的极端情况，孩子应该有自由在一定条件下试错。从未成年人的特性出发，大多数孩子可能比较叛逆，一味地阻止可能适得其反。从试错中让孩子学会如何辨别是非，如何做决定前考虑周到，如何在犯错后及时弥补，远比家长直接介入更加令孩子印象深刻。
? interference n. 干涉（贬义）
? incur v. 导致（贬义）
? repercussion n. 后果（通常贬义）
? fuel vt. 加剧
? grumble n. 抱怨
? reflect upon oneself 反省
Conclusion
To recapitulate, children should overall learn to be responsible for their own decisions.
【解析】重申观点
? recapitulate v. 总结
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