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建德培训机构的雅思 成功没有诀窍。它是筹备，苦干以及在失败中汲取教训的结果。。杭州新航道学校，25年专注雅思提分。新航道教育的教学模式运用了国际先进的测评体系和严谨科学的模拟题库，在短期内专业有效地帮助学员，不仅关注学员起点水平，更加关注学习进程，随时调整课程设计，匹配综合能力，帮助学员高效实现预期目标，达到出国的标准。 杭州雅思培训，杭州雅思培训班，杭州学雅思哪家强，杭州新航道雅思培训励志语录：Do you love life ? Then do not squander time ; for that"s the stuff1 life is made of .（Benjamin Franklin , American president ）建德培训机构的雅思。
建德培训机构的雅思 《剑16》Test 2 小作文详解：制造类流程图如何写才能得高分？
审题
常规的制造类流程图，图不难看懂，注意所有信息包含(TA)，衔接手段(CC)，动词使用灵动(LR)，以及语法层面不能都是简单句(GRA)。
Rephrasing
The flow chart is an illustration of how sugar is manufactured from sugar cane.
? 主句部分可以从句型上进行改写，将主谓宾改为主系表结构，of后面则是how引导的从句。
Body 1
To produce cane sugar, one raw material – <同位语的插入现象> ripe sugar canes – is the necessity. <先后顺序可以利用时态来体现> Having matured for one year to a year and a half, the canes are reaped <注意两个箭头，可使用平行结构> either by a giant harvester or by farmers with sickles. <表语从句> The subsequent step is that the <顶针：前一个的动词可以转成同根词不同词性变体，加强步骤间衔接紧凑> harvested canes are squeezed into juice by a rolling crusher. Till now, all the preparatory procedures are accomplished.
? 利用时态、句式、同根词变体等方式，进行衔接，而非机械使用firstly, secondly, then等。
Body 2
After preparation, <倒装句> here comes the next step of pouring the raw juice into a filter made of limestone to have the juice refined. <方位词引导的完全倒装句> At the bottom of this filter is an exit, through which the <同根词不同词性变体> filtered fluid is instilled in a heated stove, in which it is turned into thick syrup by evaporating the moisture. Afterwards, the hot syrup is placed in a spinning centrifuge for the purpose of detaching the sugar crystals from the liquid. The process ends with dehydrating and chilling the sugar solids in a container.
? Lexis: 重点关注标红动词与图中动词的同义替换。
Overview
Overall, the method whereby cane sugar is produced is time-consuming, consisting of four main procedures – cultivating, pressing, separating, and drying, and the equipment used is rather primitive.
? TA：考官对于overview的要求，在近几年一直反复强调需要more detailed，因此步骤需稍微细化。
? GRA：whereby后面是关系副词引导的定语从句，等同于through which。
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杭州学雅思，杭州雅思培训班，杭州专业雅思培训经典格言：杭州雅思培训，All time is no time when it is past.建德培训机构的雅思全方位了解 IELTS雅思考试
IELTS，由英国文化协会、剑桥大学考试委员会和澳大利亚教育国际开发署共同举办的国际英语水平测试。为申请赴英语国家（美国、英国、澳大利亚、加拿大、新西兰等）留学（A类）、移民（G类）的非英语国家学生而设，用来评定考生运用英语的能力。
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考试科目 听力、阅读、写作、口语共四科，四科取平均成绩，满分9分 |
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考试报名费用
2020年1月开始雅思官方考试，建德培训机构的雅思 单次报名费用改为2170元 |
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考试时间 每月举办1-4场考试，成绩在考试结束后5-7个工作日后查询 |
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IELTS 是为申请赴英语国家留学 移民的学生评定英语能力 |
建德培训机构的雅思
杭州学雅思，杭州雅思培训班，杭州专业雅思培训经典格言：杭州雅思培训，没有天生的信心，只有不断培养的信心。。5月29日雅思写作真题 ：高危话题：“ 广告对经济和社会的影响”
5月29日雅思写作真题
Some people think advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2025年5月29日雅思真题)
【 本题重复2017年4月22日原题】
广告话题，已经很久没有出现了，但纵观雅思考试，广告话题很常见，属于高危话题之一、与“广告”相关的常见考题有：
食品广告是否应该和香烟广告一样被禁止？
广告是否影响到人们的思维方式，产生负面作用？
用户会受广告影响吗？如何保护用户不受广告影响？
广告旨在增加产品销售数量，而不是推广其质量。你觉得这个说法有道理吗？
广告让我们变得相同，从而失去个性，你同意吗？
广告到处都是，极大影响了我们的生活。那么，广告的积极作用多，还是消极作用多？
针对孩子的广告应该禁止吗？
面对广告话题，老师总结出了以下观点，大家可以参考。
? 广告可传递信息（informative)
? 广告鼓励人们消费，有利于社会经济发展
? 而且设计美观，可以给我们的生活增添亮色，具有美学效果（aesthetic value)
? 广告往往夸大其辞（exaggerating），误导性强（misleading），从而让消费者上当受骗。
? 广告往往通过各种方式制造消费欲望，让消费者花钱购买很多不必要的商品（buy things they do not really need），从而引发一系列社会问题(social problems)。
? 广告往往显示社会差异，容易让人失去心理平衡。
本次考试对广告的影响加以了具体限定，给出了两个观点要求学生加以讨论：广告有利于经济发展，同时广告会引起人们对自己的现状不满足从而产生消极的社会问题。首先，广告鼓励人们消费，刺激人们的消费欲望，的确有利于社会的经济发展。其次，广告常常宣传一些gao档消费产品，让很多人产生渴望，从而对自己的生活现状不满足，产生不幸福的感觉，为了追求广告宣传的产品，有些人甚至会铤而走险，走上犯罪的道路。结论是：广告的确是有必要的，但要限制误导性的广告，同时用户也应该积极调整心态，尽量避免受到广告负面影响。
附：原创高分范文
Nowadays we cannot go anywhere without seeing advertisements of one kind or another. The penetration of advertising into our life has gone so far that sometimes we even feel amazed by its ubiquity. Advertising is, of course, very useful, informing us about what to buy and where to buy, but it also brings about negative social effects.
With attractive designs and images, advertising, on top of being informative, tries to persuade people to spend money on the commodities or services it promotes. This is important to the economic development of a country. As a matter of fact, we can even find a strong association between the strength of a country’s economy and the visibility of its advertising. The reason is that advertising encourages people to consume, and consumption, as our economics textbooks would tell us, is key to the economic development.
However, advertising may also have some negative impacts on the society. For one thing, advertising may make us less satisfied with what we possess and leave us craving hopelessly for what we do not. I still remember a few days ago when walking in front of a supermarket, I saw how a little girl, with her eyes glued to an advertising board, pestered her mother for the expensive toy on it that her mother apparently could not afford. Advertising, then, may create excessive desire in our heart and make us unhappy. For another, lured by the promises of advertising, some people may choose to commit crimes, which then causes a lot of social problems. A government official, for instance, may take bribery to buy an expensive lakeside house because the advertising says the luxury of living there is superb.
In my view, advertising is necessary in our economic life and therefore, it should not be banned. Yet those misleading advertisements ought to be well kept in check, and individuals should try their best to stay far away from the negative effects of advertising.
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