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上虞大学城雅思培训班,绍兴雅思备考可是,我们最常用的标点之一——逗号,我们在雅思考试语言输出过程中都用对了吗?
逗号用法1:分隔并列项
✔ A, B, and C
解析:连接大于等于三者以上的并列项,注意连词前有逗号。
‘The glass industry is aware of the issue,’ says Brian Waldron, chairman of the standards committee at the Glass and Glazing Federation [,] a British trade association [,] and standards development officer at Pikington. (例子出处:剑15 T4R)
✔ A, B and C
解析:有时候避免太过于考究,可以省略连词前的逗号。
A country’s history [,] language and ethos are all inextricably bound up in its manufactured artifacts. (例子出处:剑10 T3WT2)
逗号用法2:分隔非句子成分
3分钟学会雅思语法:你用对“逗号”了吗?
四种写法
✔ 副词/介词词组/非谓语结构,独立句子
解析:逗号连接句首的副词/介词词组/非谓语结构和后面的独立句子。
Since then [,] so many other examples have been discovered that it no longer makes sense to say that evolution is as good as irreversible. (例子出处:剑10T4R)
✔ 主语, 副词/介词词组/非谓语结构,谓语及句子其他成分
解析:双逗号隔开句中的副词/介词词组/非谓语这三类结构。
The International Institute of Noise Control Engineering [,] on the advice of the World Health Organization [,] has established an international working party.’(例子出处:剑9T2R)
✔ 独立句子, 副词/介词词组/非谓语结构
解析:逗号连接部分句末出现的副词/介词词组/非谓语结构。
The gender difference is smallest at the level of Bachelor’s degree [,] however. (例子出处:剑4T3WT1)
✔ 名词,同位语,句子其他成分或者名词,同位语。
解析:句子中名词后面的同位语,用双逗号隔开其与句子主干;如果是句末名词的同位语,句末自然句号落尾。
Clemmons contacted Morteza Gharib [,] aeronautics professor at the California Institute of Technology. (例子出处:剑7T4R)
逗号用法3:与连接词一起连接句子
两种写法
✔ 连接词独立句子,独立句子
解析:逗号与连接词一起连接两个独立句子,这类常用连接词通常是状从从属连词如Because/If/Although/When/where等。
例句:If this is not true [,] then we would be able to predict he behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born. (例子出处:剑5T4WT2)
✔ 独立句子,连接词独立句子
解析:状从从属连词可放两句中间;另外置于中间的连接词还包括平行关系的连词如and/while/but/or以及非限定性定从从属连词which /who/whose/whom等。
Interest in sport is not universal [,] and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit. (例子出处:剑9T3WT2)
This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun [,] which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age. (例子出处:剑9T3WT2)
小 结
这三种用法中,第三种是我们在写作中最容易用错并引起歧义的地方了。
切记逗号不能一“逗”到底任意连接两个没有连接词的句子也不可以让连接词连接一个独立句子。
牛刀小试
注:仅从语法层面修改。
原文:
However, books always are not attractive for children or youngster. It is because books are quite boring. A lot of words and less pictures inside the books, compare to television, television has pictures and sound, we don’t have to read a lot of words in television. But some artist in television programme or file, bring a bad image to us. Then some children or youngster will imitate their behavior.(剑4T1WT2)
修改:
However, books always are not attractive for children or youngsters. It is because books are quite boring. A lot of words and lesspictures are inside the books [.] Compared to television, television has pictures and sounds. We don’t have to read a lot of words in television [,] but some artists in television programme or file bring a bad image to us. Then [,] some children or youngster will imitate their behavior.
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上虞大学城雅思培训班,绍兴雅思备考
绍兴雅思辅导,绍兴雅思6分班,绍兴雅思6.5分培训,绍兴雅思7分班,绍兴新航道雅思培训经典格言:无论一个人的天赋如何优异,外表或内心如何,也必须在他们德性的光辉照耀到他人身上发生了热力,再由感受他的热力的人把那热力反射到自己身上的时候,才会体会到他本身的的存在。。2025年6月17雅思大作文题目:提高高脂肪食物价格?
6月17日雅思大作文示范写作
More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fattening food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
A conundrum of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, such as corpulence, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One possible remedy is to increase the price of fattening food to encourage a healthier diet.
【解析】题目与新出的剑16某题十分相似
? conundrum n. 难题
? corpulence n. 肥胖,臃肿
Concession + Refutation
Admittedly, such practice could to some extent alleviate the tension. Advocates of this solution deem that today’s prevalent food delivery services and easy-to-reach oily food mean that dietbeverage and food are no longer part of some citizens’ lives. If the price of such high-calorie food was raised, the general public who live on a tight budget would be more likely to consume cheaper yet low-fat alternatives, rather than just collapse in front of screen every evening, with fried chicken and cola in hand. However, such measure fails to uproot the problem, since the relatively rich may not be acute to the raising price.
【解析】题干虽然乍一眼看没有像only, best一类常规极端词,但是solve这个动词需揣摩:真的能“根除”这个问题嘛?还是只是“缓解”?这会是我们的切入点。
? alleviate vt. 缓解
? easy-to-reach adj. 容易获得的
? diet adj. 低脂肪的,低糖的
? uproot vt. 根除
Argument
As a matter of fact, there may be better ways of tackling this crisis. In most cases, excessiveintake of unhealthy food can be ascribed to people’s absence of awareness of how much oil and fat those products contain. In other words, hardly do consumers have a clear understanding of the nutrients listed on the package and thus neglect the repercussions of over-adsorption. In this sense, some talks should be available both online and off-line to inform citizens about the function of ingredient labels. // Besides, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, whereas awards could be bestowed upon healthy ones. Hence, more businesses would be motivated to develop and produce diet food products.
【解析】提出其他更切实更能“根除”这种问题的方法
? intake n. 摄入
? penalty n. 惩罚
? bestow sth. upon sb. 给予某人某物
Conclusion
To recapitulate, raising the price is too narrow an approach and would not have the desirable results. Not only should consumers arouse their awareness of studying the nutrient lists printed on packages, but food companies should invest healthier products as well.
【解析】重申观点
? recapitulate v. 总结
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