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嘉善靠谱的雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思嘉兴雅思培训,嘉兴雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思哪家强,嘉兴新航道雅思培训励志语录:仁者义之本也。——礼记。嘉兴新航道学校,25年专注雅思提分。新航道教育的教学模式运用了国际先进的测评体系和严谨科学的模拟题库,在短期内专业有效地帮助学员,不仅关注学员起点水平,更加关注学习进程,随时调整课程设计,匹配综合能力,帮助学员高效实现预期目标,达到出国的标准。嘉兴雅思培训,嘉兴雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思哪家强,嘉兴新航道雅思培训励志语录:把活着的每一天看作生命的最后一天。——海伦·凯勒嘉善靠谱的雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思。
嘉善靠谱的雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思对于雅思考生,雅思作文要想取得高分,就需要做好雅思大作文审题工作,下面小编为大家整理雅思大作文审题“三步法”,一起来看看吧!
雅思写作审题三步法
第1步是通读。
通常考生的习惯是,拿到作文先看一下小作文考什么图,再看一下大作文考什么题,然后开始动手写小作文。其实就这么看一下,你知道了今天考的是什么类别,什么主题,就已经把通读的工作做好了。在一边写小作文的时候,你的大脑无意中其实已经开始酝酿大作文了。
第2步是细读。
当小作文完成,考生正式开始进入大作文的时候,你需要再仔仔细细把题目读一次,并且要去找一下题目中的关键词,有没有限定词/句,有没有jue对词。所谓限定词,就是把题目的主题限定在一定范围内的词。比如:The incidence of violence/crimes for young people is increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations of punishment and measures to the situation., 这个题目中youth就是一个关键词,全文必须围绕青少年来分析其犯罪原因和惩罚方案,有的学生写到了失业率高,找不到工作,没有钱负担生活,所以去犯 罪。
这个理由用于成年人的犯罪是很好,但大多数的青少年还在学习阶段,还没工作,自然谈不上失业的压力。所以写这个话题,如果我们从家庭和学校的环 境,以及媒体的影响这几个方面去着手会更切题。所谓jue对词,就是all, best, only, the most等词汇,题目中出现这样词汇,考生是很容易提出反驳的。比如Some people think economic development is the only way to measure the success of a government. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 经济的发展确实是衡量一个政府是否成功的重要标志,我们可以写一到两个段落来说明经济的重要性,然后再写一个让步段,来反驳ONLY这个词,可以提出教育 的普及,社会福利等方面也不可忽视,这样文章就更全面。
第3步——列提纲。
这是所有写作老师都反复强调,而学生却总不愿意去做的一件事。不愿意列提纲的理由是大家总觉得40分钟时间宝贵,恨不得从第1秒就开始拼命写。但是,没有整理好思路,一边想一边写的结果是更加浪费时间,而且段落的发展越到后面越混乱。
在列提纲之初,肯定是先要brainstorming,问题是很多考生brainstorming完了就以为自己审完了题目。其实 brainstorming出来的很多点是有重复或者有因果关系的,如果以这些重复或有因果关系的点作为段落的主题句,那么写到后面一定会有问题。所以, 我们应该花一点时间整理一下逻辑。
比如讨论出国留学的好处和坏处,大多数学生很能想到下列的几个点1.得到更好的教育;2.得到更好的工作;3.开阔眼界4.文化交流 5.学习语言。其实这5个点,整理一下的话,可以发现1和5是并列的,2是其结果。3和4也同样是因果关系。这样5个点变成2个点,每个点的论证也有了着 落,写起来就会很顺。而有些学生想到了1和2就觉得自己有来两个段落了,立刻开始动笔,写完主体第1段,再开始第二段的时候,突然发现其实得到更好的工作 是更好教育的一个结果,如果要把这个段落写清楚就得把第1段再重复一遍。
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嘉善靠谱的雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思
嘉兴学雅思,嘉兴雅思培训班,嘉兴专业雅思培训经典格言:嘉兴雅思培训,你们这些生在今日的人,你们这些青年,现在要轮到你们了!踏实在我们的身体上面向前吧。但愿你们比我们更伟大、更幸福。 --罗曼·罗兰。很多烤鸭对写作中应该使用什么词汇有一个很大的误区,认为写作中使用的词汇应该越大越好。事实上,很多雅思写作老师也持同样观点,因此在写作教学过程中让学生用所谓高ji词汇替换低级词汇(比如用 “I reckon”来代替 “I think”),并认为这样可以获得阅卷老师赞赏,从而获得更好的分数。
雅思高分作文都用什么词汇?
老师并不一味反对使用高ji词汇,但无论什么词汇,都要在表意上准确,在风格上适切。如果用“准确”和“适切”作为衡量标准,那么对很多烤鸭来说,使用所谓高ji词汇可能带来三种风险:一是拼写错误(如果由于拼写错误导致句子意思让人无法读懂,那就会导致一个大错误),二是用法错误(词汇越高ji,使用的场合越受限制),三是文体错误(在一篇多数都是一般词汇的文章里,突然插入几个很高ji的词汇,其结果是破坏整个文体统一性,读起来极不协调)。
那么,雅思高分写作中,体现水平的词汇到底长什么样?我们先来看看《剑桥雅思》(13)中,考官对一篇7分作文使用的词汇所做的评价:
词汇丰富,显示出一定的准确性和灵活度,有不太常见的用词,文体正式,搭配正确。比如:complex; list of favourites; fits...my ability;specific area; many available channels.
很明显,7分作文词汇需要一定的幅度,同时需要正式的文体和正确的搭配,不能有过于口语或方言式的表达。(这里顺便说一句,被很多雅思老师推崇的“I reckon”,在表达“I suppose/think”这个意义时,其实只是一种特定群体才用的方言,不适合用于雅思作文中。)那么,“一定幅度的词汇”指哪些词汇呢?看看考官举出的例子:complex, favorite, specific, available......,我们发现,所谓高分词汇,其实不是那些吓人的词汇,而是一些相对不常用的普通词汇而已。按照老雅的估算,雅思写作高分词汇幅度大约可以定位在大学英语四级词汇表里的中高段词汇,也就是4000-5000那些词汇。
现在,我们一起看一篇《剑桥雅思》考官提供的雅思高分(黑体部分是高分词汇/组)。
题目:Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? (剑桥雅思9,test 2)
高分范文:It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programmes. Most of the colleges are already providing opportunities to give work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion, sending students to work in community services is a good idea as it can provide them with many sorts of valuable skills.
Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve theirorganisational skills. Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have many after-school activities. After-school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV, browse the Internet or play Video games.
By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable or community organisations, they will be encouraged to do something more creative. Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. Students will also gain more respect towards work and money as they will realise that it is not that easy to earn them and hopefully will learn to spend them in a more practical way.
Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the NHS, and therefore any kind of spare time charity work will prevent them from sitting and doing nothing. It could also possibly reduce the crime level in the high school age group. If students have activities to do, they will not be bored and come up with silly ideas which can be dangerous for them or their surroundings.
In conclusion, I think this is a very good idea, and I hope this programme will be put into action for high schools and collegesshortly.
大家不妨看看黑体字标示出来的高分词汇和词组,里面并无炫酷的大词汇:involve, provide, valuable, organisational, browse, creative, asset, practical, promote, shortly,这些词汇即使在大学英语四级词汇表里,也算不上最难的词汇。而且这还是所谓的“9分作文”,如果烤鸭的目标仅仅是7分,还可以进一步将其中某些词汇简单化。比如这句:Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. 如果考鸭对 “an asset on...”和“employability”的用法不熟悉,可以将本句改为:Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an attractive part of their CV but also help them find a job. 此外,评论一下本范文最后一段中的 “I think this is a very good idea”。很多雅思老师或雅思书籍上的规则都告诉学生,不用用I think,不要用good, 不要用a very good idea,因为这些太简单,太口语化。但事实上,在高分范文中,类似表达并不少见。我们反对的是通篇使用这样简单的表达法(因为没有幅度),但这并不意味着这些表达法本身不能用在雅思写作中。在一篇250字左右的作文中,如果有10个左右词汇属于以上我们定义的高分词汇(即四级词汇表中的中高段词汇)就够了,其余240个词汇就用2000左右的一般词汇就可以了。
接下来,再为大家举一个反面的例子,看频繁使用“高ji词汇”如何损害了作文的质量(黑体部分是不合适的高ji词汇,划线部分是语法失误之处)。
The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase in globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? (2025年1月9日真题)
某机构提供的范文:The world is moving in a direction where the tentacles of cross-national corporations are reaching to all corners of the world. While this trend has been applauded by the devotees of globalization as a blessing for everyone, I will say it is a generalized opinion ignoring the discrete interests of individuals.
There seems to be reasons why the prosperity of multinational companies and the ensuing globalization is assumed beneficial to all. Those who think in this way may point to legions of advantages in daily life, whether these be job opportunities, equal accessibility to the same product from any corners of the world, or the easy to reach after sales service wherever they go. Examples regarding these including the international brands such as Dell, Apple and MacDonald, all of which play a key role in employment and their products are becoming an imperative part in lives of various demographics. Given this, here comes the assumption that the populace is the whole beneficiary of a globalized economy.
Plausible though it seems, it is difficult for me to see theveneration of a globalized business world as a blessing to all. Those who focus on its positive side of this trend are oblivious to the fact that the ramifications of any social episodes should be domain specific and context dependent. Based on this, the discussion can then move on to hand questions as to which social impacts are more desirable in the local context or what local stakeholders value more. From the perspective of local industries in developing countries, the relentless invasion of international brands may oust them from local market. To complicate mattes even more, the disappearance of indigenousartefacts may jeopardize the national identity and cultural diversity in the world.
From what has been discussed above, it is my opinion therefore, the benefits of a globalized economy dominated by multinational companies do not apply to everyone.
本文看起来高大上,高ji词汇满天飞,实际上用词和语法错误不断,甚至有几处让人无法读懂。整个作文读起来装腔作势(pompous),极不顺畅,根本不是现代英语的风格,倒有些接近19世纪维多利亚时代的扭捏文风(awkward style),老雅强烈建议大家远离这样的“范文”。从用词的角度,本文使用了不少超纲词汇,比如tentacle, discrete, legions, populace, beneficiary, demographics, plausible, veneration, ramification, oust, indigenous,其中很多词汇都是误用,或让本来明确的意思变得很朦胧。令人匪夷所思的是,在一篇看起来正规得拿腔拿调的作文中,突然出现一句非常口语化的 “here comes the assumption that...”,读起来实在让人忍俊不禁。
更多托福课程、雅思课程、雅思写作单项突破、留学规划、四六级课程、PTE课程、多邻国课程、A-level课程、GRE课程,或者有任何疑问,欢迎联系新航道广州学校。嘉兴雅思培训,嘉兴雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思哪家强,嘉兴新航道雅思培训励志语录:教也者,长善而救其失者也。——礼记嘉善靠谱的雅思培训班,嘉兴学雅思。